Look

by Jacklyn   Mar 1, 2005


Look at my eyes,
perfectly fine,

look at my grades,
perfect straight A's,

look at my bare arms,
no cries, no scars, no cuts,

look at my head,
no bullet wound,

look at my neck,
no rope has ever touched it,

check my pockets,
no drugs or pocket knifes fill them,

nothing to threaten my life,
but yet you still worry about me,

when others chose to bleed,
when others take weed,

when others suffer,
when others call for help,

help to make them believe,
this life is really worth living,

they state they need help so clearly,
but your all to blind to see,
and you keep on worrying about me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    great write-->I understand it completly but of course, if you know me, I always have something to say! Well you parade around the fact you don't touch drugs nor the blades , you make good grades and don't get in trouble correct? well , just because someone doesn't fall into that don't mean anything is wrong but if you do believe you're ok and someone believes you are not...ask why! you need a straight answer on why they believe you need some help ya know? i used to be in relation with you but i was never sane hahaha j/k...thank you for the comment!

    God bless
    love Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    So beautifully written - It makes so much sense to me, you have penned a very touching and straightforward to the point poem. I loved it, as always.

    Lufffffuuuuulsssss Yew :D
    ;;-- Kalah

  • 19 years ago

    by Bumble-Bee-xx

    hey, that was a great poem. keep up the writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    hey jacklyn...if thats your real name?!
    that was really good!
    i dont really know wat to say-but well done,
    plz wb, i need to talk to somone othe rthatn every one in thsi crazy life

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