an in-depth look at your personal side. interesting and disturbing, but not the way that makes me wanna go call 9-1-1 and snitch about someone who is killing themself, just in a sense that is surrounds me with a feeling ive tried to forget, but it haunts me still. awesome usage of the english language to vividly portray the depression commonly found and casually overlooked. i feel the pain and anguish, yet i see a will to carry on. my only criticism in this one is maybe two mispelled words, however minimal, you did ask for criticism, so im trying to help you out here. "where" was one of them, although it is spelled correctly, it is misused. i can't remember the other one, so ill finish on a positive note - this piece of literatue makes me relive past experiences, it affects me so deeply, and thats not easily done, especially with poems written by teenagers, so i commend you on a job well done, and wish there were more poets like yourself, to give me a reason to read more poetry. thank you.