~ very nice, it's very well written :)
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

wow, amazing poem! i love it, and the ending is great!

it turned out gr8;)

I like this poem...it has a very raw feeling to it! Great job~Holly

im in love with your poems. the ending was fab, dont worry about it. keep writing, and stay happy xxx

wow this poem is a 10 not a 5 ... i love your writing ... this is the first poem i read that rhymes the most and it is awsome ... the ending is great i always perfer a none rhyming ending if possible .... 5/5 as always

great work...and I like the ending...no worries... ;)

xxx

wow thats all i can say