A Wave Of Thoughts

by Pianist   Mar 1, 2005


A wave of thoughts
crash over me.
As endless as
the open sea.
The pictures of
my broken past.
Burst from my mind
unexpectedly fast.
A wonder of puzzles
and riddles I find.
A million small questions
to which I am blind.
A tidal wave
consumes my soul.
The numerous pounding
has taken it's tole.
Then as fast as it
came, it left once more,
and opened my mind
unto a new door.
That was the day
I really could see.
When a wave of thoughts
crashed over me.

Copyright © 2005 Nobody

-A personal favorite of mine.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    I really liked it, it describes so truely how we feel sometimes.Keep up the great work

    Sabine

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Over all, it seems like youve really thought out that poem before you wrote it, so i enjoyed reading it and the wording was good too. But i thought the flow was a bit awkward in this part :
    the tidal wave
    consumes my soul
    because the flow isnt the same as the other parts. Over all, very good poem, and ill still give it 5/5 because i really liked it.
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Terribly thoughtful ride (no pun intended, really).

  • 19 years ago

    by *liZ*

    that was really good!! I like the analogy:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Seronum

    Great poem and for some reason this site isnt letting me vote an is saying i already voted which is impossible. Anyways 5/5 nice!

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