Its Good, i liked it,
you seem to have changed ur type of poems tho, there still good tho, just different

yeah, it does seem different, but in a good way, it's so good

byes and laters,
brandy

Such great imagery - i find the sea a good all round subject to associate with inner turmoil . (i make no sense :D ) Anyway this is great - terrfic use of litterate terms.

Well done,
;;-- Kalah <3

WoW you are truely a poet I luved this poem. Keep it up your an amazing poet. Much Luv, Amanda

I love this poem. It is awesome. It flowed so...awesomely...(I don't think thats a word but I'm making it one so RAWRRR...I'm very out of it today {hyper}) but anyways awesome job and as always KEEP WRITING! 5/5

Wow another really good poem well done I enjoyed reading it xx

Great poem and for some reason this site isnt letting me vote an is saying i already voted which is impossible. Anyways 5/5 nice!

that was really good!! I like the analogy:)

Terribly thoughtful ride (no pun intended, really).

Over all, it seems like youve really thought out that poem before you wrote it, so i enjoyed reading it and the wording was good too. But i thought the flow was a bit awkward in this part :
the tidal wave
consumes my soul
because the flow isnt the same as the other parts. Over all, very good poem, and ill still give it 5/5 because i really liked it.
SatuzKa

I really liked it, it describes so truely how we feel sometimes.Keep up the great work

Sabine