Heaven

by Kayla   Mar 1, 2005


*Okay give me some credit, I wrote this when I was about 8*

*Dedicated to Sage Rodel, Loving Sister*

My sister is in heaven,
And I am here on earth,

I would give my all to see her,
No matter what it's worth,

I miss her soft sweet smile,
And the way she told me stuff,

All the memories good and bad,
Don't seem to be enough,

He took away her striking smile,
And a beautiful laugh I haven't heard in a while,

When she got really happy,
Her eyes would get so bright,

Her face seemed to open up,
A shining carefree light,

She would giggle and laugh,
Her smile brought tons of joy,

And even though she isn't here,
I would give my all to see her,
And for her smile to reappear.

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  • 19 years ago

    by tjsbabygurl

    That was a very good poem and you only 8 yrs. old! It was better thatn I could have done and I'm 14! Keep up the good work. Hey check out some of my stuff when you get the chance!

    ~*~Corie~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Emmer

    this better thn i cud ever do and im 16 so for an 8yr old its bloomin gr8! well done
    xmx

  • 19 years ago

    by Pianist

    It's pretty dang good for an eight year old! Nice job! Read some of my stuff if you ever get the chance

  • 19 years ago

    by Jordan

    You wrote this when you where only 8? It's really good!

  • 19 years ago

    by she died screaming.

    wow that poem was really good!! :) hope you're okay with you're sister being gone and everything. just remember the purity of ghost is only what you believe. if you dont belive in them they wont show you. but if you do belive in them they will prove to u that just because their soul is lost and there heart is not shown doesnt mean they dont love you anymore, and they will do whatever is in there power to tell u that