wow that poem was really good!! :) hope you're okay with you're sister being gone and everything. just remember the purity of ghost is only what you believe. if you dont belive in them they wont show you. but if you do belive in them they will prove to u that just because their soul is lost and there heart is not shown doesnt mean they dont love you anymore, and they will do whatever is in there power to tell u that

You wrote this when you where only 8? It's really good!

It's pretty dang good for an eight year old! Nice job! Read some of my stuff if you ever get the chance

this better thn i cud ever do and im 16 so for an 8yr old its bloomin gr8! well done
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That was a very good poem and you only 8 yrs. old! It was better thatn I could have done and I'm 14! Keep up the good work. Hey check out some of my stuff when you get the chance!

~*~Corie~*~