Black Salvation

by BrokenMisery   Mar 1, 2005


Savor the pieces of my shattered soul
pray for salvation
but hell grasped me whole
devouring pieces of my broken heart,
soaking in blistered shrieks

What happened to an innocent start
until bound to red scars
creating patterns in hollow stars

...and see my black tears destroying in the caves of my mind
echoing through the deadly skies
I'm falling, falling to the depths of hell's claws
with my blood screeching in endless calls

The black sky pouring blood
Veins pouring blue
fountain the pressure
as the pressure grew
held my wings but still I fell
prayed to heaven
but I'm left in Hell...

hit me across the face
let my pain drench
let me see the blood i taste.
Kill me and rip out my bones
watch my skin peel
don't call me your w****
for a life you can't feel
don't dive into my brain
and try to steal my thoughts
‘cause I'm sick of these taunts
just put me aside
and throw me away
and my soul has already died,
that makes me nothing today…

And the black sky is pouring blood
Veins pouring blue
fountain the pressure
as the pressure grew
held my wings but still I fell
prayed to heaven
but I'm left in Hell...

Pray for forgiveness
And received black salvation…

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  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    I believe this is my favorite of yours so far. It's everything a sufferer should relent.

  • 19 years ago

    by broken angel

    Babe I'm serious! This is amazing, I will definitely be a loyal fan. You are now added to my favorites. I love this, the ending is so powerful and overwhelming! Amazing.
    Luv always, KT

  • 19 years ago

    by Hina

    Great!! Loved it..beats the little KIDS poetry on this site. Very different Good job
    Hina

  • 19 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Wow, that was really really good. Very dark and deep. That had a lot of emotion in it. Loved it..5/5
    >3jess

  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    Very dark!! Nice.. Loved it.. 5/5

    *> : PainOfOne