by Mark Spencer Mar 1, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Sometimes she's a schemer, |
Hmmm seems like you've been in these situation man...it seems so real...so when i read it, its like im hearing you talking....do you write poems to say the words you feel from your heart...or the way you feel....very good poems...! |
by HOLLY ARMER
This is spectacular! I loved the detailed descriptons you used...just amazing! Great job~Holly |
by Angie
Beautiful... put some music to it and it could be the perfect song. Keep up the great work |
by me
Oh wow - your way with words is really quite amazing. As I read this I could imagine those as the lyrics of an all-time popular standard (and that's a compliment in case it isn't clear hehe). You know what I mean, lol. It was a poem that I should imagine touches everyone, no matter who they are. Well done. |
by Ashleigh
that is a very nice poem |