~ excellent, katie! you've done it in no time, amazing talent! impressed! :)
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Very good, except I think they have to be no more than 1 side of A4 for the comp. My fav. lines were
'A man lying on a cold park bench
On his body I can smell the stench
Of cigarettes and of course of beer
What on earth is he doing here?'
Keep it up xxx

Great Poem =) WOW!!! 5 stars for you Katie.. Take Care /September Spring

great poem wonderful keep it up. 5/5