~ very very nice write
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

"Roses bleed your name chorus my sorrow and echo my pain"
Wow...that line is extraordinary!
"Countless days endless years I'll be sipping sorrows tears"
Another awesome line! Very well done! The whole piece is brilliant...Holly

wow, i'm sorry i missed this one....i don't know why, you're on my faves...but anyhow, very beautiful!! I like the middle 2 stanzas -5

with love,
Heather.