by creasy Mar 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
It was dark, |
by creasy
i just wanted to say thanks for the comments, they mean so much...you all have great work!! keep it up!! take care...:) |
by Emilia
wow wow.. 5 stars! Take Care |
by Shædow Poet
Rocky start... but you pulled it off well by grasping the readers and pulling on their emotions. An unfortunate twist of events, you carried on not only from her death, but how others reacted. Well done, though you didn't need to force rhyming to make this powerful. it already was. |
by Erika
Oh my God, did that actually happened? I hope you are better now.. if it is of any help, you write beautifully, congratulations, and keep on writing |
by Kalika
Excellent poem....so well done....I have seen that scene before, although I was the one finding a friend....you captured it well.....great job.... |