by creasy Mar 1, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Remember when we used to talk, |
by kaysha
Very cute poem! wondrful rythem... keep it up. |
i like it! if i remember i'll definately come back to see if you ended up adding more! either way it's a good poem:) |
by JJ
Nice job..well written! 5/5 keep it up |
by creasy
thanks heather..yeah you understand it correctly..i actually put it in there first but i wasnt sure if it was right..thanks!! :) take care. god bless.. |
I think that was a good ending...hmm perhaps you could stick it in broken friendships if I understand the poem correctly? great work however-5 |