Thoughts of revenge

by BrokenToy   Mar 1, 2005


You shattered my dreams
or so it would seem

I was thorn
I was broken
I was hurting
but now I'm back

I now hate
I now despise
I'm now strong
so go and hide

Wait and see
until we meet

You will suffer
the pain I suffered
You will know
the pain I knew
You will understand
the pain I understood

You will break
the way I was broken

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  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    This was the best of your poems I read so far :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    Yeah i clearly see the meaning and emotion coming from this. great poem, and ive felt the same way. just today actually haha

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    I love the use of repition in poem - and this is no exception
    One thing
    Brake at the end should be break
    =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaely

    This is very deep, and has quite a lot of meaning in it... some people try to put meaning across but it isn't very understandable, but this u can understand quite clearly and as a result it is an awesome poem
    *rates 5*

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