~ beautiful write heather, like always
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

great poem! lol, i'm lovin it! keep up the good work, bye see ya later girly! PLP

~lil slam~ it's a better poem then you thought because it's got a 5/5 from me!

wonderful poem! the meaning is so powerful and expressive. i think this is a really good poem because i like how you write your emotion and feeling so well. amazing poem!!

wow it was awsome hun ..... i found it sad to read it was great keep it up hun love ya always >:|<
peaceeee take care

This is a very sad poem. You always convey your emotions so brilliantly! I can kinda relate to this...Well done as always~Holly

Great expression its a sad poem but beautifully written! thanks for the comment means a lot.

take care