Dancing Rivers

by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤   Mar 1, 2005


What’s the big deal about fitting in?
Is it another teenage fight to the finish?
Like fitting into a certain size?
Why would you dress to impress
When the only person you have to judge
Is yourself, only you…
Be the head of the heard,
Never a follower
Carve your own path
In this clique-filled society
Before you know it
Friends acting like strangers
Leaving you in the dust
I am enounced in this discriminate forest,
Not a place to go home to
Crouched down against the brick wall
Slamming my head,
These thoughts weighing me down
Dancing rivers down my face
Who needs them right?
Who needs anyone? Just leave me be
I just wanted a simple friend

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy

    wow...i love your stuff!! im adding you as a favorite member<3 rate and comment some of mine 5.0

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    wow, sorry to judge you, i know its not my place, but this is great. it means alot to me. keep writing, for everyone and yourself more importantly, good writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤

    Thanks guys, It kind of started out as one thing but ended as another... Oh well, I'm happy with it.

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Hey, great new poem, well done, you write some really amazing stuff well done

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Wow, impressive poem, sad, I like some of the messages in it, such as being yourself, I also loved the title and how it fits in with the poem, keep it up xxx

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