by Carmen Mar 1, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
"I have something to tell you today, |
by Jamie
I liked this one too its one of your better ones i think but the rhymes weren't all matching and still a little elementary but great job 5/5 for sure |
by -Erin-
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by Robert
This was alot more to the point and a more enjoyable read but. Still alittle to fluffy for me.Maybe its my age too. Can you write something you really have to think about. Can you even make me think about the message you try to convey. Think about that next time you write. |
by *Guerita*
this is good i liked how u started it and ended it I know iz hard to get courage to say things at times and sometimes it takes for ever to say wut u feel |
by Amit
~ one word, "wow!" |