~ one word, "wow!"
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

this is good i liked how u started it and ended it I know iz hard to get courage to say things at times and sometimes it takes for ever to say wut u feel

This was alot more to the point and a more enjoyable read but. Still alittle to fluffy for me.Maybe its my age too. Can you write something you really have to think about. Can you even make me think about the message you try to convey. Think about that next time you write.

Love the beginning and end. ^.^
wonderful poem! </3 Erin

I liked this one too its one of your better ones i think but the rhymes weren't all matching and still a little elementary but great job 5/5 for sure