by ŦÅüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ Mar 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
There are just too many things |
by Victoria
Great write it maybe short but its really powerful keep it up and thanks for all the comments! |
by Eibutsina
I felt such hoplessness after reading this, depression, locked in despair, revolving around hopelessness...short and subtle, but still touching and full of emotion all the same. Keep it up :o) |
by EpithetPoet
Very short and bitter-sweet :). Nice. |
by confusion
great work, very powerful. can relate to a lot of it, hope things will be okay for you, and always be yourself, its one of the nly things no one else can be :) |
love the last stanza, i can feel all the hurt in it! If someone doesnt love you for you then they are just a facade of your dreams...don't let something so ignorant hurt you like this...i can see who you are in every poem and i love you just the way you are :) |