awww really sad, yet excellent. loved it!

love the last stanza, i can feel all the hurt in it! If someone doesnt love you for you then they are just a facade of your dreams...don't let something so ignorant hurt you like this...i can see who you are in every poem and i love you just the way you are :)

With love,
Heather.

great work, very powerful. can relate to a lot of it, hope things will be okay for you, and always be yourself, its one of the nly things no one else can be :)

keep ya head up, an the fab work, lu -x-x-x-

Very short and bitter-sweet :). Nice.
-A

I felt such hoplessness after reading this, depression, locked in despair, revolving around hopelessness...short and subtle, but still touching and full of emotion all the same. Keep it up :o)

Great write it maybe short but its really powerful keep it up and thanks for all the comments!

take care