well written! i love the part where you said "But yet I feel really alone
Like a rose in a desert"... beautiful passage. anyways, keep it up!
Ariane
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the rhyme was inconsistent.

I would suggest using a more vivid, broad word choice. This is okay, but a bit plain...

wow, i liked the idea of a rose in the middle of a desert. it was a good poem, and i actually don't have any critique, i just liked it the way it is. 5/5!
SatuzKa

That is amazing, very well written I like the bit about needing water and the way the poem worked was great, very well done!

you all.
thanks for commenting on my poem ROSE it means alot.
xoxxox
nida

another great job. Loved it

It was good, it wasn't absolutely great... I don't really like how you changed the topic and said that you were thirsty... You do have better ones, this one just needs a touch-up... But over-all it was good.

5/5 That was really good just one thing in line 2 you spelled fellow follow.Great job keep up the good work

I love how your portrayed urself as the rose in the desert great sense of imagery...lol i also have a poem where i relate to a rose check it out if u want... called little red rose
mwah keep up the good work

Hey this poem has great thought! good job.

Check out my poem I'm so sick of cryin. Please I think it might be a good one.

thanks chad. i cant believe i didnot notice that before**

Good poem. Thanks for commenting on mine! I really appreciate it!

i would luv it if you tell me what i should change~!!!~ this poem means alot to me. i want it to be best~!!!~

you really have a talent. a 5

Good poem.
I think it doesnt need a fix.

I really dont know what to comment, in some parts it is really good,honest, but some parts just dont fit, I think you have the potential, keep on writing

wow loved it xxxxxxxxxx

Short, but very very good.

this is a realy great poem with wonderful imagry. i love how you compared yourself to a rose, its truley beautiful, keep writting,
love polly

I like this poem take a 5