Fading again

This is good, some capitalization wouldve been nice, i like the last four lines, those are good.

Lol, your not bad at all. work on the ryming scheme thats all. the flow is good. i enjoyed this one, good job!

instead of asking how bad you are rather ask how good you are.... with that out the way i thought it was pretty amazing, and don't worry keep writing you'll get better with practice.....not that you aren't good as it is

~*~awww sad but really good, oh and spankumz for ur comment on my poem, i appreciated it~*~

wow this is amazing. i luv it. eep it up^**^

thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. it means a lot to me~!~
thanks
luv
nida