by Leah20
This was really nicley written. Usually cutting and depression bore me and I stop reading them in the middle, but you held my attention the entire time. Really nice job! If you ever need someone to talk to pm me or email me @ penguingirl007@yahoo.com. You are a really talented writer, keep up the good work |
by shenoa
oh my god girl... that was incredable... i had in my head while i was reading, how much i can relate... and my favorate part was what each cut was for... up untill you stated... "i did this all, to get back at you..." wow girl, i did a double read... i dont often read poems twice, esspesually long ass ones like thiss... but, i read this not once, not twice, but three times... i love this poem. you are a brilliant writter... your comments mean so much to me... and i hope vis versa... anyways... i WOULD give it a ten.. but i guess... a five will surfise... |
by Red Charm
OH MAN that was so beautiful. You have a way with words like few writers I've seen. Totally amazing. WOW. I loved it. |
by Red Charm
If you ever need to talk or anything email me at angel1989inmomseyes@yahoo.com |
by Mattie
thats really good i like it. its way better then my poems |
by pain is me
Great job!!!! |
by shenoa
"These marks on my body,From eternity’s undying resent,This inscription on my skin,From my pain and torment" |