Fear

by Rashelle   Mar 2, 2005


I try to run
As far as i can
But theres no where to go
I lost before i began
Lost this losing fight
The fight of fear
Its always with me
hidden within
Where no one can see
Its beneath the skin.
I try to hide
But it wont subside.
I try to be strong
But it always proves me wrong
It holds me back
Taking me off the track
as the tears flow
The fears grow.
It continues to pursue
And i now know
You cant run from you
I'm the the only one
who can make the fear
Finally and for always disappear

*i know its not the great but i felt like writing.It was just a five min thing,BUT id still love comments and votes:)*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow, very good, 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by bucky

    it is well done ... i believe you can work on this and make a couple of senetences better but other than that it shows a very very good meaning of fear .... It holds me back
    Taking me off the track
    as the tears flow
    The fears grow.
    best line love it ... keep it up i look forward to more wonderful poems from ya

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    i really like it. i wonderful. i cant write half as good as you.

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    It was a lot better than u think! I thought it was a job well done!

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