Changed

by yo yo yo   Mar 2, 2005


When you left my life everything changed
I spent months trying to pick up the pieces
That you had left behind
But on each piece of broken glass
Is a lessen that I wont for pass
I changed
After you I grew up
I learned a lessen that I wont ever forget as much
As it hurts I would never regret
Its about time that I move on
Count to three and ill be gone
Don’t try to come back to me
Because you really made me see
That me and you wont ever be

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  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Hmm not one of my favorites, but I have some good constructive criticism. Your rhyme scheme is a little off, you have a nice vocabulary but I believe you either want to rhyme or not rhyme at all. Secondly your sentence struture is all over the place, either lenghten the lines or shorten the long ones.
    Take Care.
    Erica