Very romantic. Passionate and symbolized with beautiful symbols set in a dark and illuminating atmosphere. You displayed the main object of the piece well, along with the feeling of fear of going on never to have expierienced love, or be loved. you also portrayed the healing of the event powerfully when using the woman's image as a symbolic gesture of what the object could bring. I espcially admired the lines,
"Tombstone is glistening with the elixir of life, that is love,
Falling to my knees, hand slipping from the dagger, I rest,
I lay feeling the hand of death, turning to see full moon light,
You may ask what is the dagger more chilling than death,
The dagger is fear of never finding someone to share your love,"
the only thing I didn't appreciate about this poem was the bluntly stated symbol of "the dagger of fear"
i thought that was too simply stated and could have been written as a better image.
overall, well done