pretty good poem. i liked the meaning.

great job, i liked the way it was choppy, different from everyone elses poems, prolly the reason you got so many comments,lol :) ttyl lyl
jescelle

Thank you everyone who voted and commented on my poem I appreciate it. Becky

very good i liked it alot keep em coming

Really good poem!! You are a very talented writer and I love all of your poems! Thanx for the comment on mine and I hope you will continue to comment and rate mine.~5/5~

nice poem u were probably feeling like me at the time, it suks no? but ur rigth writting does make u feel better
take care

good poem keep writing thanx for the comment

Thank you for correcting your comment. And it is better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all. Do you agree?

Excellent poem.....flows well, deep, and meaningful. LOVE the ending. Keep up the great work!
-Tara

omg sooooooooo good! u rok! this is ezactly how i feel about my x! only u actually hav the words! ur gr8 keep it up! btw thanx 4 the comment!
~Niko~

hey thats a really good poem lol i didnt write that poem out of heart break...actually i wrote that last year.but anyway your poem is good and from the heart.good job, keep writing!

very cool poem, haha yeah that poem i wrote was about a couple guys that i know that left and dont talk to me anymore . . .it hurts alot yeah i really liked ur poem awesome job

It's pretty good. Chris left me for another chick too. I can relate.

I really like your poem it's so sad... It feels just like I felt when I wrote mine. But as you say it there's other fish in the sea. I like your writing a lot.

Nice poem I know how you feel...

*> : PainOfOne

very well done 5/5

i love this poem... its beautifully written. the poem of mine that you commented on wasnt about me... it was written in a friends point of view. you did a lovely job on this poem. keep writting i look forward to reading more of your poems.
~cort~

I this poem a lot it shows good emotion

WOW, yeah, my poems...WOW, this poems is like word for word what i feel...thanx for commenting on my poem. maybe u could chekc out some of my other ones? either way, super job, i cant help with that answer tho because i have been asking myself the same things for the past 3 months...super job
danielle!

First thanks for the comment on my poem. Ok lets start the poem was really awesome it shows emotion longing for actions. It was well written and comes fr. the heart. Still great work 5/5 =)