amazing!!! im really sorry for everything you've gone through... i hope it all turns out for the best. beautifully written, as always.
Ariane
-xXx-

Wow that was such a great poem...If you ever need to talk you can email me I know people barely ever do but I mean it...... I am always here
Take care xxx

Another wonderful poem, sorry about everything you've gone through, stay strong, keep it up xxx

~ nice write
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Andrea, This is so emotional and breaks my heart. I hate you are going through all this and I pray things will get better for you. I know I'm old enough to be your Mom, and that's o.k. I still have a young heart. I want you to know if you ever need me, all you have to do is e-mail me, I accept them on this site. I promise you I care from the bottom of my heart and I'll always be here. Emotional write but beautiful, another well written piece. Take Care, hugs, lol, *Ann*

I love it, but i'm sorry it had to be real.

hey things might get tough, but keep your chin up! theres always another day, things will brighten up, hope things will get better! great poem! PLP, take care girl!

~lil slam~

p.s. ever need to talk i'm here

keep talking to me my darling....i love you and i loved your poem.....kisses

Andrea, this hurts to read....its greatly written dont get me wrong but i hate it in the sense its heart wrenching! if you ever need someone, all you have to do is call on me ok! God bless you, you're so beautiful and talented, i don't know how you can hurt :*(

i love you hun -5
love Heather.

Yet another one of your awesome poems! Love the title and the overall concept. Nice vocabulary also. Keep it up! Take care!
-Conner

great poem , ur an amazing writer, and really have talent, i hope to read more of your work soon, great job!!

its a wonderful poem andrea. good job. keep it up.

awesome poem.. love the second and third stanzas the most... great work & 5/5

Great poem.. I really liked it a lot!
5 stars for you...
Please check out my poems, it would mean a lot ot me.
Hugs from September!

WOW!! I saw so many comments to this poem, I had to check it out for myself. It was awesome. This poem was one that goes right to the core of your very being..in that one can relate to it. Great job!! Look forward to reading more of your work.

suspenseful write nice flow

Well, I know what draws me to your work now; it's the realism. I sincerely wish it wasn't true, though.

Courage, determination, strength.

Bert

Great job, good expressions.

..wowing :x thats deep, man, real deep.

-Church

Very well written Andrea! Keep it up! Thank you for some of your comments on some of my poems:) I really appreciate it! *5/5* God Bless!
-x-Sedusha-x-