Paradise Isle

by creasy   Mar 2, 2005


Beautiful blue, clear water,
I can see all the way down;
And a nice relaxing place,
and no one is around.

Sounds of the water’s waves,
that sound so soothing;
Clear, blue sky with beautiful clouds,
that are forever moving.

The hot sun shining down,
beaming very bright;
The wind whistling,
keeping me feeling cool and light.

The sand pure and white,
and feels so warm;
Such a beautiful place,
no one can do any harm.

Towel on the sand,
listening to the shore;
Getting a tan,
who can ask for more?

**please comment and vote..thanks for reading!!**

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  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    very good poem. i luv the beach and it just makes ma want to go back there more. keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Exellent it makes me think of my vacation thats coming up in June! Love the ocean!

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    its pretty hun, i'm not much for nature poems but cute! -5

    with love,
    Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    oo of course..i would never take anyones opinionpersonally..i actually thought the same thing but i hadnt the idea what word to put..but with the help of my sister, i found just the word..but thatnks for your suggestion..:)

  • 19 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    Indeed who could ask for more? Great write just one little thing I thought I'd share I thought that the line:

    "that keep moving."

    seemed just a little cut-off to me. Dunno if it was just me but I thought I'd share anyways for whatever help it might be. I would suggest maybe a couple more words like maybe make it that keep on moving but yeah.

    Please don't take that personally. I loved the poem anyways just the way it is :)

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