that is so good I totally understand it and I'm gonna have to show someone that k lol I'll give ya credit for it don't worry=) anyways really great poem I'll give it a five for sure k
love ya
Nate

Hmm. Well, I found a contradiction in this poem. Your poem is brilliant. The contradiction appears, however, in your bio in the author page:

"Hey, Im not that great of a writer, I already know."

Absolute tosh (yeah, i'm british)! I ask the High Court: how can someone who is, as the author alleged "not that great a writer" write a poem of absolute brilliance as above? hmmmmm?

They cannot. Therefore, you must be a talented writer. I rest my case.

I think I do understand the poem...but, then, only you could understand the full extent of the connotations, as you're the author...

I like this poem...And you commented on one of mine. I didnt think it was a song my teacher asked me if i could put it on here because he thought of it as a good poem so i just did what he asked of. But I liked it and I can post anything i wany plus if like people dont remember it they can look at it!

Cool?

I like this poem...And you commented on one of mine. I didnt think it was a song my teacher asked me if i could put it on here because he thought of it as a good poem so i just did what he asked of. But I liked it and I can post anything i wany plus if like people dont remember it they can look at it!

Cool?

I like this poem...And you commented on one of mine. I didnt think it was a song my teacher asked me if i could put it on here because he thought of it as a good poem so i just did what he asked of. But I liked it and I can post anything i wany plus if like people dont remember it they can look at it!

Cool?

lol yes im a blonde. it shows sometimes too >.<

just because im a blonde doesnt mean im retarded. and youre the one who called me a prep, i never said you were one.
by the way, out of 14 poems, i have one love poem. so if youre gonna try and argue with me on MY comments page, at least get your facts straight.

my best impression of this poem is someone who has been with you through thick and thin and in the end it made the"rainbow" i guess it is far from the truth, however, for some reason, that is all I could keep thinking about, especially when throughout all the turmoil and devestation, there was always one ray of sunshine. If this is the case, remain in close contact with whoever inspired you to write it. If not, well, not all devestation should be considered harmful, because it allows new life to flourish. The poem is beautifully depicted and well thought-out, even an untrained eye can percieve the display of magnitude in your stanzas, regardless of the true meaning. It is really a good poem, all in all I personally favor it over some of my own. good job on this one

u say ur not a good writer! have u read one of ur poems! ur my fav, let me tell u, plez help me out w/ mine
luv ya
Jo

Hmmm.

I'm shocked at the brutality with which people commented here.

Your poems are fine, just keep writing, don't stop.