Is that true my friends dad hits her and she tried to tell someone and then he came after her but she is ok and he is gone for good!! great writting keep it up!!

no, its not true, used to be not no more, i dont live with him i live with my mom now. but she aint any better sometimes i mean she never hits me but she doesnt really see how sad and depressed i am, but whatever its life i mean, it will go on somehow thanks for the comment.

great poem!

Wow awsome poem....I cant explain how I feel!! My dad use to hit me too, but today, after I moved out, he's in deny!!! Thanks for your comments, they mean so much to me and I totally relate to your poems too, you are a great writer!!! I have added you to my favorites... =0) Keep in touch!!! You are not alone!

thats really good! like swati said, you can feel your pain just by reading it...i actually like...tensed up at the part about the missing chunks of your hair...keep writing for us=)

hey i loved ur poem its very deep i hope to hear more from you

Oh I'm so sorry! I hope this isn't true! I'm here if you ever need to talk! I hope you're ok! Great poem!

So sad hun