by ** JeNa ** Mar 3, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
What happened to this friendship? |
by Julie
That was a GREAT poem hun, good work i love it!!! love ya xoxox |
by Brookeღ
Exellent job on this poem! Very well written and true liked it alot! |
great poem!! this is so true, i can totally relate!! thanx for your comments!! |
by Fireflower
wow.. the last stanza was really awesome!! i can relate alot. keep it up! |
by Leah20
I thought that it flowed nicely, but sometimes it felt as though the rhyme was forced. Over all good job. Keep writing! |