by cac123 Mar 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Your always crying to yourself, |
Nice job dis poem is great ~*~ |
by Jason Meres
I don't know quite what I was thinking when I commented earlier....that came across as very turse and it wasn't meant to be, I apologize. I enjoyed this piece very much, your thoughts and content are always very solid. Truly well done. |
Wow it sounded like you were describing me...... I thought it was beautiful just like the title:) i really liked it and i thought it was one of your best, defiantly more then a 5* |
by Jason Meres
Very well done, I might make a few minor changes to some of the verses, but it's really not my place to say. The content was great, and the scheme was very well pulled off. |
by Maddie
very well written.. i hope you don't mind me making a slight criticism.. a HE wasn't mentioned at all until the end, it seemed like it was 2 seperate poems made into one. |