by Pianist Mar 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
A boy that stares |
wow..i really like it...i get it...except im a chick but ya still....it had good flow keep it up |
by creasy
this is a great poem! i love it! keep it up! :) take care. keep your head up! |
by Lil Luce
wow again excellent 5/5 ur a really good writter! espec liked the line....A simple pawn, used like a toy. |
by hussain
nice poem....u got talent there. keep writing |
by Seronum
Good job keep it up! |