Your That Girl

by Amanda   Mar 3, 2005


You feel like you are caged,
And you need to be freed,
Your plan of escape,
Is for your wrist to bleed,

Not a soul that you will tell,
What that awful man did,
You kept your mouth shut,
Like a bottle with its lid,

You try to find you way home,
But you get lost along the way,
You let so many people in your heart,
But they never seen to stay,

You've given up on trust,
You've given up on hope,
It seems these drugs,
Are the only way to cope,

You hurt every day,
You suffer in this pain,
Your hearts been burned,
By in ever lasting flame,

You feel your so alone,
And no one See's you fall,
You try so scream so loud,
But no one hears you call,

No one hears your cry's,
No one hears your screams,
The ones you trusted most,
Are the ones who broke your dreams,

Your that lonely girl,
Thats so naive,
You that lonely girl,
The one inside of me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Emily

    hey. i love your poems because i can relate to just about everything you write. maybe if you have time come check out mine called numb its really cool. im a cutter too so.....yea we can relate to eachother if you are one. see yaz lataz bye bye hunz

  • 19 years ago

    by Jenn

    even more real i love your poems your on my favorits list... keep writting i can realate to almost everything your write.... xoxox BJ

  • 19 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Spot on up untill the last stanza. "Naive" and "me" but im sure you know they dont rhyme. Its just so difficult getting words to rhyme with some other words. Apart from that, its brill. X

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I think you did an awesome job on this one...excited to read the rest!!! 5/5!