by Fireflower
omg that poem was 100% a 5!! oh wow.. that poem was so beautiful! wow. it was so true and you wrote it beautifly! keep writing! seriously! |
wonderful poem. i totally luv it. keep writting. you are really talented. |
I love this so much!!! take a look at summa my poems if u get a chance |
by Brookeღ
Exellent job on this poem a 5 forsure! Keep writing! If would check out some of mine and let me know what you think! Thanx |
by Incognito
Wow. I think your poem is brilliant, the only thing is at the end it seemed to lose it a bit. But its great and thoughtful and I love it. |
by creasy
i love this poem..so very true..if ppl can put back the hate and just love one another...but that will never happen..but excellent poem!! flowed great...keep it up!! :) |
very impressed! I do agree hatred should die and love should be revisited but thats virtually impossible unfortunately but i give you major props on this poem...it's so beautiful :) |
by Bizarre
so true. great poem. |
by Amit
~ excellent and thoughtful |
by Forever29
A very inspirational poem, I especially liked the ending! Check out mine, if you're ever bored. |
by Kristina
ok so i know a lot of people have probably told you but this is really good and you are so true! there are such good like rhyming and everything and it like just flows so well its really good i wish i could right more like this but i think im getting on my way u really summed up like how some people really so discriminate great job keep it up! |
by stephalee
omg this is like soooooooo good!!!! keep it up ur soooo good |
by Hoover
*5/5* |
by Andrea
wow!! this is amazing! |
by Emilia
very good poem =) I voted a 5! awsome work.. keep up the good job! hugs from september |
by Areyoucrazy
Aesome poem . ONE of the BEST I have read in a while .. It really made me thikn of how everyone is different and not everyone is the same ... kind of reminded me of something that happend today where I live with two people ... |
that is so true. what has our world come to today. no one really understands that it doesnt matter what you look like were all the same. |