If I died tomorrow

I loved that i felt the same once but the poem didnt seem right to me but u make urs work great.
comment mine plz see ya

Very sad poem, i absolutely felt sadness. this poem is great and i know u write very, the flow was good.4/9

god bless

Sad but though beautiful
I think becky drake says the truth, everybody's feels that way sometimes I think. Your poem is so full of emotions, I dont really know you But i'm sure that many people will care if you die, and they will noticed you're not here anymore. Don't make yourself down Try to stay positive. I know how hard it can be. 5/5 for sure.

I think every one at times thinks exactly what you wrote. As a child I did, and as an adult I still do. I'm not a depressed person, as most people think if you write something like this, its just our emotions......Sometimes we are so elated with joy, and others we are just kinda down.....i know you are a very talented writer, because you make your feelings real, and the readers feel it also....Great job, please look at mine when you have time, Love ya Becky

This is so sad, you convey your emotions flawlessly! I could really feel your despair, keep it up~Holly