Comments : If I died tomorrow

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    there's no way I'd know, true, but I would figure it out, and if you left me tomorrow logan, or today, or anyday, i dont think i could live, i need you so much :( I would care so much if you died, ever..even if its when ur 81, i'll cry a million rivers, i love you so much, please don't ever leave me, i need you so badly...you're my everything <33 xxxx i love you

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

    ps...good write, sad though...but still amazing as always xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Sad poem, beautifully written though, really enjoyed reading it, even if it was really sad. Keep it up xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    That is such a sad poem but I still love it. Even your short poems are good. They are better than mine.

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Exellent very well done! Check out some of mine I am not good just write to get things off my mind and for fun. Thanx and keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Bredada

    i like dz poem ur good

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    o no logan dont tell me ur gona kill urself..lol! that poem was amzing and DUH i would be so f u c k i n g saaad:'( always remeber if u wanna talk im here !! 5 minutes away from ur house !!! lol
    Take care,
    E.

  • 19 years ago

    by Mysticaljazlyn

    great poem......sometimes i feel the same way....Its hard...But that moment passes and i feel a little better. But always just a little...Your lucky to have someone like Mortalidaga, someone who really loves you (besides your friends and family)

    **jazz**

  • 19 years ago

    by Angeline

    I spend a lot of time thinking about that, not if you died (no offence) but if I died, what would happen then, and would anyone care....I think many people will find themselfes in that one...

  • 19 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Beautiful poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Tammy

    Such a beautiful & sad poem. I really liked it.
    Take care & God bless.

  • 19 years ago

    by cac123

    heart felt excellent

    that was really deep i hope you stay strong
    beatifully powerfull writing.
    **~~**
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    wow this a really good..no doubt your an awesome writer 5/5

    Unloved ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I think alot of people can relate to this.... I liked it, it was sad and touching and it's made me think about how important everything is to me so Thank You for that:) Anyways AMAZING poem. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    This is so sad, you convey your emotions flawlessly! I could really feel your despair, keep it up~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Becky drake

    I think every one at times thinks exactly what you wrote. As a child I did, and as an adult I still do. I'm not a depressed person, as most people think if you write something like this, its just our emotions......Sometimes we are so elated with joy, and others we are just kinda down.....i know you are a very talented writer, because you make your feelings real, and the readers feel it also....Great job, please look at mine when you have time, Love ya Becky

  • 19 years ago

    by miracle

    Sad but though beautiful
    I think becky drake says the truth, everybody's feels that way sometimes I think. Your poem is so full of emotions, I dont really know you But i'm sure that many people will care if you die, and they will noticed you're not here anymore. Don't make yourself down Try to stay positive. I know how hard it can be. 5/5 for sure.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Very sad poem, i absolutely felt sadness. this poem is great and i know u write very, the flow was good.4/9

    god bless

  • 17 years ago

    by Kimmie

    I loved that i felt the same once but the poem didnt seem right to me but u make urs work great.
    comment mine plz see ya