there's no way I'd know, true, but I would figure it out, and if you left me tomorrow logan, or today, or anyday, i dont think i could live, i need you so much :( I would care so much if you died, ever..even if its when ur 81, i'll cry a million rivers, i love you so much, please don't ever leave me, i need you so badly...you're my everything <33 xxxx i love you |
by ?
Sad poem, beautifully written though, really enjoyed reading it, even if it was really sad. Keep it up xxx |
That is such a sad poem but I still love it. Even your short poems are good. They are better than mine. |
by Brookeღ
Exellent very well done! Check out some of mine I am not good just write to get things off my mind and for fun. Thanx and keep writing! |
by Bredada
i like dz poem ur good |
by Elise
o no logan dont tell me ur gona kill urself..lol! that poem was amzing and DUH i would be so f u c k i n g saaad:'( always remeber if u wanna talk im here !! 5 minutes away from ur house !!! lol |
by Mysticaljazlyn
great poem......sometimes i feel the same way....Its hard...But that moment passes and i feel a little better. But always just a little...Your lucky to have someone like Mortalidaga, someone who really loves you (besides your friends and family) |
by Angeline
I spend a lot of time thinking about that, not if you died (no offence) but if I died, what would happen then, and would anyone care....I think many people will find themselfes in that one... |
by Red Charm
Beautiful poem |
by Tammy
Such a beautiful & sad poem. I really liked it. |
by cac123
heart felt excellent |
by Unloved ♥
wow this a really good..no doubt your an awesome writer 5/5 |
I think alot of people can relate to this.... I liked it, it was sad and touching and it's made me think about how important everything is to me so Thank You for that:) Anyways AMAZING poem. 5/5 |
by HOLLY ARMER
This is so sad, you convey your emotions flawlessly! I could really feel your despair, keep it up~Holly |
by Becky drake
I think every one at times thinks exactly what you wrote. As a child I did, and as an adult I still do. I'm not a depressed person, as most people think if you write something like this, its just our emotions......Sometimes we are so elated with joy, and others we are just kinda down.....i know you are a very talented writer, because you make your feelings real, and the readers feel it also....Great job, please look at mine when you have time, Love ya Becky |
by miracle
Sad but though beautiful |
by Sweet lig
Very sad poem, i absolutely felt sadness. this poem is great and i know u write very, the flow was good.4/9 |
by Kimmie
I loved that i felt the same once but the poem didnt seem right to me but u make urs work great. |