godo job hun, just as good as the first time =) i hope this never happens though, i hope there's never any mroe attempts...cos i know you're better than all that, you're so amazing xxxx I love you hun...xxxx <33

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

This is poem is sooo good, but I hope you never do this, or haven't already, keep it up xxx

great poem i hate my life and ur poem put it into perspective...good job

oh hun i voted earlier on this and forgot to comment its a brilliant poem but its soo very sad please dont do anything please luv ya jen x x x take care x x x

This is such a powerful poem! I really like the verse:

I close my eyes
Waiting to fade to black
I take great comfort in knowing
That when I do, I won’t be coming back.

I love this poem and all of your others!
Mwa!!!

Really nice poem Sharon! I really like it! (",)

~Krissy

i like this poem literally! its a good one good job!

I really liked this poem my dad commited suicide adn ive thought about it cuz he was my everything he was also my best friend and whenever i think about doing it i think of my friends and family so dont do it itll only make more pain in the world check out mine sometimes i dont have very many cuz im a new writer so i only have a couple but ill get more.

Kirsten

whoa, that was sooo breath-taking, i hope you never do this :(:( thats so sad, i hope you're okay, i wish i could take away the pain. the poem was mouth dropping, just wow... take care love xxx

R.I.P Baby.
Sharon 1987-2006