love love love it!so sad, and amazing metaphores.
~a friend at wits end

Oh I'm so sorry if this happened to someone you know! That's really hard to deal with! Excellent poem though! Vote and comment on some of my stuff if you ever get the chance.

you copied this i av read this b4

This is actually not plagiarized (as far as I can find). It is a remake of the poem by Charles Causley about a murder that occurred in 1844. You can see the original by going to google and searching for "The Ballad of Charlotte Dymond"

Very nice work, Emily... but you probably should have left a comment either here or at the end of the poem about the subject matter.

thanks yer i dun it bout a girl who died back then as a remake 4 me english project but i put it on here 2 see what every1 thought bout it cheers 4 commentin though XxemilyxX