Dealth 2 hurricane ivan

by Ally xo   Mar 4, 2005


* just to tell you all this hurricane blew away my house and almost killed me this is a big part of my life please don't make fun of it *

white tears
blood now wears
the hear of people crying
seeing people dying
all feel boxed
everyone being rocked
the wind shakes
ground breaks
horrible new dreams
those terrifying screams
is it over? never!
all will remember
cleaning made
it is starting to fade
a new life begins
bad life thrown in bins

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  • 18 years ago

    by Unforbidden

    I agree with them this poem is really good... i could never think of this... i really think that this poems say alot even though its short that must have been a horrable experiance... but this poem is freakin awsome

  • 19 years ago

    by Mike

    oh wow! i guess your somewhere by the south.. yeah there was alot of devastation in Florida and Louisana and south texas

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    holy crap. your style is awseom. i think you did an amazing job here. in so few words you are able to come across such an awsome expereince. makes me feel like i was there. keep up this awsome work. Much Luv

  • 19 years ago

    by Jordan

    I wouldn't ever think of making fun of your poem it was reall very good. Im really sorry about your house. I hope all is going well. Thanks for your comment. It means alot.
    -Jordan

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