Who Really Cares?

by Jason   Mar 4, 2005


The people who,
Are supposed to care,
Put you through,
So much despair.

Going through this maze,
To find the truth,
Takes away days,
Of my valued youth.

The hands of the clock.
Get me by,
Sometimes a walk,
Helps me not want to die.

The ones who care,
Cheer me up,
They are there,
When I'm down in the dumps.

Thanks to those,
Who are always there,
God only knows,
Where I'd be without your prayer.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    This was written beautifully. I loved it.
    you're really talented in writing.
    the ending was very good.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by ŦōüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ

    hehe really nice poem! Written well and words were used very great..Keep it up! 5outta5
    Shannon

  • 19 years ago

    by Kailynn Makenna

    JASON!!!!!! thia is a SPECTACULAR poem!! I LOVED IT YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER!!! AWESOME JOB MY MUNCHKIN!!!!!! I GAVE IT A 5!!!!!!!!
    :)

    xX-Katherine-Xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Jess

    EXCELLENT POEM DEAR!! I LOVE IT!! AND I LOVE YOU !! :o) great job jason keep it up!! I FREAKIN LOVE YOU MAN!!!! :oD

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