EXCELLENT POEM DEAR!! I LOVE IT!! AND I LOVE YOU !! :o) great job jason keep it up!! I FREAKIN LOVE YOU MAN!!!! :oD

JASON!!!!!! thia is a SPECTACULAR poem!! I LOVED IT YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER!!! AWESOME JOB MY MUNCHKIN!!!!!! I GAVE IT A 5!!!!!!!!
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xX-Katherine-Xx

hehe really nice poem! Written well and words were used very great..Keep it up! 5outta5
Shannon

This was written beautifully. I loved it.
you're really talented in writing.
the ending was very good.
much love,
marjan