i can't believe this is rated 3 very gud poem to tell u the truth i got confused in parts but that is what made it interesting GGGreat job

hey thank you so much for your comment in my poem... but seriously u r really good at poerty i read all your ones on the site and love them all looking forward to ur new ones
xo Ally xo

Wow. That's so true. I agree completely. There is a fine line between love and lust, but the difference is that lust can present itself in the form of love. I hate that very much! I want love, not lust, but it keeps becoming more and more difficult to find. And I am only reminded by it when I see cuts on my friends wrists because they were hurt by the one who "loved" them. I hate having to hurt them even more by telling them that that person must have never really loved them. So, over all, it was a great poem and I am happy I read it. Thank you for your comment too. There is no need of jealosy because I am no better than you, and that poem was old. So, I should be envying you. This poem really made my mind turn. Thank you for sharing!!!! I really enjoyed it!!

~Sierra

That is really sad. I'm sorry for you or your friends that have expierenced love that way. It's not always like that. Hope you pull through.great poem. >3jess