Skewed Perspective

by CinnamonTwirl   Mar 4, 2005


She deserves more, but uncertainty reigns
Finding the good in his faulted nature
Because accpetance is ignorant bliss

She is blind to the offensive
Craving degrading comments
Because attention is attention

She believes she is pleased
Content with what is
Because she's been taught to make due

She is dieing essentially
Lovingly squandering away her life
Because she settled for him

***Please vote and comments, this is my 2nd attempt at writing a poem that doesn't rhyme. And i NEED A TITLE*** thanks. -Katrina

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  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    Great poem CinnamonTwirl!
    5 stars for this one..
    Please check out my poems.
    Tkae Care

  • 19 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    good job for only your second attempt well done i dont have a title suggestion but i liked it x x x take care x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    hmmm... not sure for a title, for ur second non-rhyming attempt i thought it was realy good, keep it up xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    That was great. You need to make it heart felt to touch the readers heart. Right fr. your heart and not w/ ur mind. I don't have any suggestions about the title you should figure it out to become much better. It was written well and honestly it is really good. Great work!!! 5/5 =)

    Can u plz check my featured poem titled My Story thanks a lot!!! =)

  • 19 years ago

    by CinnamonTwirl

    thanks for the advice, i will definately keep that in mind. i wanna be a better writer.

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