This whole poem is a metaphore and i know that there is nothing to so about it really, you either get the poem or you don't you have to look really hard into the words to discover the metaphore.

I hope you enjoyed it and i really appreciate all your comments or votes on this poem, i will try to comment back on one of yours, just be patient with me.

I really liked your poem, great work!! A very special way of writing*5*

i want to ask the "mirror" a couple questions too

Mirror Mirror, why do you show him a false face
to provide betrayal of his loving grace.

Mirror Mirror, why do you hurt his heart of gold
when he of which shines with his beautiful soul.

Mirror Mirror, how could you paint him dry
of all the beauty with every painful cry

---hmm sorry got caught up in the mood, ran through my own words fast, forgive me.....lol.....you're a great person hun! i love your poems although this is not one of your best, 4/5 however!
love you!
Always,
Heather.

Not quite sure this poem goes quite right ...

Although i do understand what you mean it just didn't sit too well with me, but that is my own oppinion x

another great poem like always love the metaphores, i see myself asking the mirror the same qustions day after day... great poem 5

thanks for your votes and comments they are greatly Appreciated

~!~Noelle~!~

it was realli good it realli made me think and re-examine things, oh yeah, i have been workin on my structur lateli thankz for the consrtuctive criticism it reallli helped u can stop by and let me kno if itz gotten any better.

Nice poem. sad but well written. people can really relate to it. I give it a 5/5.

Very good poem I love the creativity and the fact that most people will be able to relate!! keep it up

take care

amazing! i love it, especially the ending! :)

thats really intresting, but it's really cool, keep up the good work! PLP

~lil slam~

The last line makes me think the most... I'm not sure I get the full meaning (I'm not too great at metaphors), but I definitely relate...and I at least get a meaning out of it even if it isn't exactly the same as what you meant... This reminds me of "insomnia" the thing about too much thinking...and worrying about the future...and wondering why...and blah.

xxx