thanks i was thinking about it.

i would add on to it but the thing is that i dont think of life as a rainbow at all. sometimes i think of it as a sad sad thing every one has to go through. but for class i couldnot rite that so i wrote about some thing happy. like rainbow.

It is good, short and sweet lol well done

~ its very good, nida. no need to change it, you can write another one :)
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Very true. Nice thinking.

I absolutely hate being limited to a certain length or being forced to write a certain style- I can tell that this was kinda forced for you-but good job anyways, it actually wasn't too bad.

I agree with all the others.
I think it needs a touch.
You have lot of potentials in you.
keep on writing.

i agree with the others.. it seemed like it wasnt finished... you need more details... but other than that, it wasnt all that bad of a poem!

vedali

Actually I thought it was pretty good. I rather enjoyed it.

I would leave it alone and if you wanted to rewrite it then post the new one as well and title it the same but add the 2nd after it.... anyways, that is just my opinion....

--Sher

great poem i rly liked it xxx

No its a good poem I'm sure if added to it it would be even better!

take care

very good Nida =) 5/5! keep it up..
take care