Day & night

by Lil Luce   Mar 4, 2005


***please comment...Thanks***

Glistening light comes seeping through the window of my soul.
The morning sunshine bouncing off the shattered pieces of my heart.
The reflecting light illuminates every ache within me.
As this new dawn breaks I reminisce to the time when the deep, ineffable feeling of love pulsated in our hearts.

As the monotonous days drift by I pick up the pieces of my fragmented dreams wishing night to fall.
Wishing for those dreams where you still hold my hand in yours.
But dawn breaks again uprooting me, tearing me away from you once more.
Leaving me ever more hurt to the interminable grief of days gone by
and awakening me to the heartache ahead.

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  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    omg that was wonderful. just love it.5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Georgi

    wow this is amazing i LOVED it

  • 19 years ago

    by SweetDreamer

    Another great poem, I really loved the first stanza, because it created such a vivid picture in my mind with its words. Nice work!:)

  • 19 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    I liked this poem. It was real nice, Keep writing. When you can, please read my new poem “Love”. I would appreciate it if you could rate and comment. Thanks in advance. I REALLY appreciate it.

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    *jaw drops* that was fantastic, very very deep amd powerful. you are truly a brilliant writer! def a 5. keep on writin!! whoa...

    take care, lu -x-x-x- :)