by Lipton Mar 5, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
A tear rolls down my sodden cheek, |
by Tammy
Beautifully written Lipton.Very honest and full of emotion. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. |
by Amanda Bee
Wow! Excellent poem, Lipton! I really enjoyed it. My favorite part was where you wrote:"Until the End of Time I’ll love you, |
by Jesse
A lot of emotion in this poem. I am guessing it was first writen as a song with the chorus repeated. But anyways I like it. Take care. |
by Mandy-Rae
i liked this one, keep up th egood work. Check out some of my stuff when you get time. |
by Brookeღ
That was an amazing poem! It was sad but very well done! If u would check out some of mine sometime! Thanx and Take Care! Brooke |