excellent poem, i can totally relate to it.. great job 5/5! :o) check out some of my poems, i wrote 2 new ones today, tell me how you like them if you have time! thankss

..xO Jessie

very good well done xxx

thats a brilliant poem well done its really emotional i liked it alot thanks for your comment x x x take care x x x 5/5 luv jen sorry it took me so long to comment

Good poem you have summed up your feelings in a short way that works well!!

take care

I rated your poem a 5 it sound like something i would write thatnks for the comment
I like your poems september
much love take care Katherine aka Kathy

I used to feel that way about someone. The problem is when you give half your heart to someone, it tends to get stolen.

This is a lovely poem and is shows that even small poems can show exactly the right message. Good Job. Love Emma xxx

Also, forgot to mention 5/5. Love Emma xxx

aw... so true.. short and sweet.. awesome job!

Short, and sweet. Good job, I liked this one too...You're a great writer you know that? Awesome work.....

I know exactly how you feel... I feel this for someone. It's hard... Great job.

Love always,
Tiff

Very well written I liked "when you're not here it feels like half of me is somewhere else" Another good poems!

I can relate to this but obviously itsa girl in my case....... well written poem...very emotional.....keep it up

very good again, emotional poem, good work, keep writing

this is also a great poem!! i love it... i know exactly how you feel...many ppl can relate...nicely written..keep it up!! :)

wow, you got deep feelings for this boy! Great job wiith putting them into words!

i loved it..a 5/5

personally i liked it., to me it had meaning and strong feelings behind it, keep up the great work and thanks for your comments. good job

Hello i thought you were just telling some one something off the top of your head. I have tried to paint a picture with words using adjectives and such it one this to tell some on how much you love them a true writer can show them with words paint that picture for me and your onh your way to being a great poet so take care

well written loved the poem short and sweet

Jacs
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